Attack of the minorly improved still life!

So I wanted to fix the glass bowl in my still life, and... so I did. Still not ideal to me but... time is of the essence. Also made some other minor changes...


Francesco Giroldini said...

looking good, I like the grapes especially!
maybe you could try to soften the bump on the orange and lemons with some sss... and maybe blur the reflections a little on the cherries and on the knife.. also maybe try to avoid dark shadows around the fruit?
you may need some caustics around the bowl.. which for some reason now seem a bit bright..

Bohdon Sayre said...

Thanks man, I was gonna ask you what you thought could improve it. Oh and there are some caustics, that's what blows it out too much, gotta tone it down.